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#fff Story Substance, Structure, Style and the Principles of Screenwriting - Part 3 The Principles of Story Design

still constructing

I have already written the note on the Chinese translation version of this book, you can read it here: “#033 故事——材质、结构、风格和银幕剧作的原理”. The only reason why I reread the English version is my distrust of translation and my pursuit of the original meaning.

7 The Substance of Story

THE PROTAGONIST

  • Generally, the protagonist is a single character.
  • For two or more characters to form a Plural-Protagonist, two conditions must be met:
    1. All individuals in the group share the same desire.
    2. In the struggle to achieve this desire, they mutually suffer and benefit. If one has a success, all benefit. If one has a setback, all suffer. Within a Plural-Protagonist, motivation, action, and consequence are communal.
  • A story may, on the other hand, be Multiprotagonist. Here, unlike the Plural-Protagonist, characters pursue separate and individual desires, suffering and benefiting independently.
  • It’s even possible, in rare cases, to switch protagonists halfway through a story.

A PROTAGONIST is a willful character. Quality of will is as important as quantity and the true strength of the protagonist’s will may hide behind a passive characterization.

The PROTAGONIST has a conscious desire.

The PROTAGONIST may also have a self-contradictory unconscious desire.

The PROTAGONIST has the capacities to pursue the Object of Desire convincingly.

The PROTAGONIST must have at least a chance to attain his desire.

The PROTAGONIST has the will and capacity to pursue the object of his conscious and/or unconscious desire to the end of the line, to the human limit established by setting and genre.

A STORY must build to a final action beyond which the audience cannot imagine another.

The PROTAGONIST must be empathetic; he may or may not be sympathetic.

THE AUDIENCE BOND

THE FIRST STEP

THE WORLD OF A CHARACTER

THE GAP

ON RISK

THE GAP IN PROGRESSION

WRITING FROM THE INSIDE OUT

CREATING WITHIN THE GAP

Fine writing emphasizes REACTIONS.

THE SUBSTANCE AND ENERGY OF STORY

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